Exactly! The seven words conjure a huge amount of background out of nothing. Highly amusing.
If it helps, the cabinets are the originals from when the building was built, and every condo had the same ones. In my mind, it detracts from the personal nature of the story though. :)
Oh yeah, it's not that it removes possibilities, just in my mind it changes the dynamic -- why was the note in our condo and not another one? If it was cabinets just for ours, "her" could have been sitting in the next room, while he seethed.
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Date: 2005-07-13 02:16 am (UTC)Who wrote it and why? Was it out of anger or despair? Or was it something else? Hmmm...
I may write something... that's really cool.
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Date: 2005-07-13 03:16 am (UTC)If it helps, the cabinets are the originals from when the building was built, and every condo had the same ones. In my mind, it detracts from the personal nature of the story though. :)
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Date: 2005-07-13 03:23 am (UTC)I think I will write something - that is just too cool. :-)
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Date: 2005-07-13 03:25 am (UTC)